Echostep / tempestclan

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name Echostep
age 45 moons
gender female
clan Tempest
rank warrior

reason for name N/A

appearance description

A pure white she cat with startling green eyes. She has short fur and is very beautiful.

quirks

She is deathly afraid of snakes, because her sister was killed by one.

personality

Fierce, and beautiful, Echostep is a big seducer.  She is sweet and kind, but can be the arrogant and slightly cruel. SHe can be very stuck up too.

family

Her unborn kits.

experience

After falling in love with a rogue, she becme pregnant with her first litter. The rogue left her, and she went seeking refuge in TempestClan. Her kits are very close to being born.

[dreamstar ★]

Hi (:
(1) I like where you're going with her but I'm going to have say no to the experience, as we don't accept pregnant cats or kits. If you want you could try and plot that out in-character after she is created, but you won't be able to do that right now. I would suggest that you talk a little more about what her life was like as a rogue and where she grew up, etc. Who were her parents? Did she have any siblings as a rogue? How did she find out about Tempestclan?

(2) As for personality we recommend that you write several paragraphs. So maybe develop on how she acts with other cats, how she feels about herself, what she wants in life, etc. How does she speak to others? What are her strengths, her weaknesses?

(3) EDIT: Also since we are an account per character site you should create another account, "derpy2" which will then be renamed Echostep. The reason we ask you to name the account 'derpy2' to begin with is so that we know who plays which character. After that, post Echostep's bio from that account.